This is a rework assignment that was not detailed. Please see below the professors comments. I have attached the completed document. Please see attached. If you have any questions please ask.
You have good information in your plan, but you need to revise to be more specific in several areas. Section 3- You did not address the research and development requirement. Section 4- Good technology assessment, I would like to see specific hardware and software you will use. Section 5- How many employees will you need? Full time/Part time? Section 6- What are your qualifications to be President? What are the other specific positions that will be needed? Good chart, how many employees for each position? You only used 2 headers in you paper, but you discussed 9 separate topics and it was confusing understanding when you finished discussing one topic and moved onto a new topic. Please review your title page, as this is the first thing and investor will look at, you cannot make those errors. Remember, as an investor, I want specific information presented clearly, not general discussions in a format where I have to hunt for specific sections. Please revise and resubmit.